Effective Remote Work:

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Second paragraph of “A Normal Day in the Office” ends with:
“As the outside world begins to show signs of sunlight, it’s time
to get off.”

I really don’t think this is the wording that you want to go with. There are connotations. Perhaps: “As the outside world begins to show signs of sunlight, the train approaches your stop.”

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I can see how that might be a problem. The book is currently in copyedits. If the text hasn’t already been updated, I will address it. Thanks for pointing this out.

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